Thursday, December 17, 2009

Capitulo 14

Capitulo 14

*****2 months later******
"Hey, Chris. What are you still doing here? You should go home."
Chris heard, Maria's mom Teresa telling him. He was uncomfortable from sleeping in the chair next to Maria's bed. Miranda was currently dozing on the extra bed they had gotten for the room.
"I'm here until 3:30 today, then my flight leaves. I just wanted to spend some more time with her." He told Teresa as he held Maria's unmoving hand.
"OK, I won't stop you, I just came to change the flowers, and then I'm off to work. You know, Chris I really want to thank you for paying for her hospital stay. I don't know where I would be without you and your father. Thank him for me. Please."
I will, Teresa, just like I have for the past 2 million times that you have told me to thank him. And by the way, I'm doing this as much for you and for myself. I love this girl too much to just let some doctor prod and poke her."
Teresa looked as Chris gave Maria's pale face a loving look. She was surprised that even though Maria and Chris only went out for a few times, Chris was so tied to her daughter. For the past two months, he was at Maria's bedside every chance he got. She could still remember the shocked look on his face, when she arrived at the hospital.
****2 months earlier***
"What's going on? Where's Maria?" Teresa asked a sullen looking Chris in the hospital waiting room. Miranda, Esme, Paul and Harry were all there with him.
It was Esme who answered. "She's in the ICU. We can't go see her yet."
Esme then teared up and Harry was the one to console her by hugging her close to his chest.
"What's wrong with her? Why is she in Intensive Care? The doctor's said that her blackouts were never going to get so bad."
She was shaking uncontrollably . Chris had her in his arms. She later thought that it felt more that he needed her support more than she needed his. It felt weird to to her, because she gave birth to the girl in the ICU. But when she saw how devoted Chris was to Maria, she knew that he cared far too much for her. Her only prayers were that Maria woke up and saw the man who loved her so much.
"It wasn't a blackout this time. She was seizing after the police left. And apparently, her brain didn't get enough oxygen. That's all that they are telling us now." It was Harry who spoke the last sentence. She only met Harry a few times, but Theresa already liked him. He had a calming look about him. She realized that Miranda and Chris still didn't say anything. It was 2 days later that they were allowed to see Maria. Who they were told was in a coma. She would wake up, but they didn't know when or how. They didn't know if she had any brain damage.
***** present time****
Teresa changed the flowers and was sitting next to Chris when Harry and Esme entered the hospital suite. They came and visited as much as they could, but they had their own lives. They were a couple now. Teresa often wondered why they did not get together long before. They had known each other for 5 years, and yet they have an amazing chemistry that is just a little bit smaller than Maria and Chris's.
The other couple, Miranda and Paul, entered after them. Both of them still felt extremely guilty for going out, and Teresa could still see the hurtful look on Paul's face when he looks at her daughter. Miranda told her, that she knew that Maria liked Chris more than she liked Paul. She still felt guilty, but less than Paul did.
School was now over, and all three of them were graduated, even though Maria did not take her finals.
Life went on, even for Maria, who was stuck in a hospital bed.

"Well, chicos. I have to go to work. I will see some of you sooner than later." Teresa said as she got up 2 hours later.
"We should go too, We need to go shopping for some stuff for the apartment" Harry said, as he and Esme got up.
"We're leaving too, I have my first soccer game since my brace fell off, so I want to get going. I guess we're leaving you alone Chris." Paul said.
"Oh, don't worry about me, I have great company." Chris said without taking his eyes off of Maria's face.
"I'll see you guys later." Chris told everyone as they left.
He turned to Maria and sat closer to her. He took her hand in his own. He began crying.
"I don't know how I'm going to survive without you, you have to wake up. I need you. I can't live without you. I know that I don't know you that well, but what I do know about you, I love that. I need the fighter in you to fight, to wake up. For me, for Miranda, and for your mom. I need to you in my life Maria. I love you."
He kissed their jointed hands when she gave a little squeeze.
"Maria....???"



****more are coming soon. I think my blogger problem has been fixed. This is about the thirtieth time that I am posting this chapter. It is 2:52 in the morning and I am tired. If it works, you'll get another chapter soon then.***Hope you like it.


Thursday, December 3, 2009

Capitulo 13

Capitulo 13

After the police came and Maria woke up, she finally saw her father.
He was still unconscious. Chris held her tightly as she bent over her fathers body.
"I hope you rot in hell, scumbag." She said as tears streamed down her face.
She turned to Chris and sobbed into the crook of his shoulder.
"Excuse me, Maria? Esme told us that this man is your father. Could we take a statement please?" One of the female officers asked her.
"Yes, of course." she told her," Ill be right back." she turned around and told Chris.
"I'll be waiting."
"Could you call Miranda for me, please? But not my mom. I want to be the one to tell her that he's been caught."
"OK. I'll call her."
Maria went and gave her statement away from everybody else. She didn't want everybody to know her history.

The police went after Maria gave her statement. They took her father away. Miranda came and hugged her friend. Everybody was worried about Maria, but could gather the courage to ask her anything.

Everybody was sitting around the cash desk when Vera showed up.
"Ah, mis ninos. Are you guys OK? I was so worried when the police called me. And who are you?" Vera asked when she saw Phil sitting next to Miranda. Everybody was paired off.
Maria-Chris, Esme-Harry, Miranda-Phil. Only Maria and Chris looked like an actual couple, even though they were officially nothing more than friends. Everybody else looked awkward.
"I'm Phil. I'm a friend of Maria's. I'm just here for moral support."
"Oh God, Vera. I am so sorry. This is the second time that I brought chaos to your store." Maria stood up and walked over to where Vera was standing "I'll leave. I promise you that you will not have more chaos in this store from me."
"Maria. Don't talk about that. I love having you here. And chaos is a part of life. It's whats kept mine interesting for the past month. I can't thank you enough."
"Vera, please don't talk like th...."Maria raised her hand and looked at it.
"Look at my hand" she told everybody but nobody in general.
It was shaking unconrollably. Then the shking went into her arm...shoulder....and her entire body. She was seizing, Nobody moved.



***Since I lost my other ones, this one is a short one. I'll write more..I swear that I will. I promise you that Temporada 1 will finish by mid next week***

Tuesday, December 1, 2009

UPDATE

OK, so to whoever is reading this...

Blogger wasn't working for me for some strange reason so I couldn't post anything.
Also, my laptop had a virus so I lost the next 8 episodes, which means that I have to reawrite it all over again.
I want to finish this season probably by next week sometime, so you might get 1 or more episodes a day.
Season one will have 20 episodes, I'm not sure if there will be a second season.
I'm writing a new episode today, so I'll probably post later.